The Ring & The Devil Kindle Edition

I just finished reading it. And although I enjoyed it, there are so many unanswered questions!Who the hell is Emily??What else did Emily see in her vision??Is Donna really going to be naked and immortal forever??Is she gonna be horny for all eternity as well??Can people see her nakedness now??What about Betty? Is she immortal too??So many unanswered questions due to an abrupt ending.I still enjoyed it, but it feels like its missing an epilogue, or that it's going to lead into another book.But being it has been six years since this book's release, part of me doubts that..

I found the story premise to be excellent but the execution was lacking. If bad grammar bothers you, give this a pass as it reads as if written by a grade-schooler. Is it too much to ask for the author to grasp that (to few, to many, to far) is wrong? Not to mention constantly breaking down complex words, is radio active the same as radioactive? Other than the fact I had to stop every few minute to figure out what the author meant, I enjoyed the story immensely which is why I gave it only three stars.

Beautifully written, exciting with a good combination of teasing, sexual tension and magic/fantasy. A good close to this chapter, but could really do with a sequence...

Ardor,I enjoyed your little tale about The Ring and The Devil. I also found it a little difficult to follow at time and near the end it appeared to be rushed at times. I also felt that the story wasn't worth the high price of $3.99 that you are charging. For that price, I would expect a high quality of a story then what I read.

This book has promise, but definitely goes screwy, half erotica, half fantasy. Quite simply, a girl stumbles upon a ring while enjoying her first lesbian experience and offhandedly says "I wish I could stay like this forever" not realizing it's a magic ring that grants her wish, specifically that she will stay naked as she was when she made the wish, and also immortal, young and horny forever. At first she just doesn't care about getting dressed until she tries to return to civilization, then realizes she's still naked, then when she tries to get dressed she feels like clothes won't fit and when she finally succeeds in gettign her shirt on, it eventually just disappears in a flash of light because she mus be naked from now on. Fortunately, she also has the protection that nobody seems to mind, when her nudity is pointed out they just say "As far as I'm concerned you can stay that way forever." The devil part is where it gets wierd, the ring comes with a stone dildo that is apparently the actual magical dick of the devil, or rather a god of destruction who feeds on her horniness to break through into this world. The story keeps going back and forth between the simple awkwardness of everyday public nudity and the over the top magical story of trying to save the world from a horny devil. It feels like two stories at once and if you have ever wanted to try readign both of these types of stories simultaneously, then I recommend this book.

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